{"id":2822,"date":"2010-12-21T06:30:42","date_gmt":"2010-12-20T17:30:42","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/?p=2822"},"modified":"2010-12-21T08:27:41","modified_gmt":"2010-12-20T19:27:41","slug":"tuesday-poem-christmas-exchange-burning-with-joan-of-arc-by-helen-rickerby","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2010\/12\/21\/tuesday-poem-christmas-exchange-burning-with-joan-of-arc-by-helen-rickerby\/","title":{"rendered":"Tuesday Poem Christmas Exchange: &#8220;Burning with Joan of Arc&#8221; by Helen Rickerby"},"content":{"rendered":"<h4>Burning with Joan of Arc<\/h4>\n<p>The yellow sand is hot under my palm<br \/>\nDespite my shorts and tee shirt<br \/>\nand slatherings of sunscreen<br \/>\nI can feel the sun<br \/>\nscorching my skin<\/p>\n<p>Joan is stretched out beside me<br \/>\nsun hat over her face<br \/>\nbikinied body idolatrous<br \/>\nworshipping the sun<\/p>\n<p>\u2018More sunscreen?\u2019 I ask<br \/>\n\u2018I\u2019ve already burned,\u2019 she says<br \/>\n\u2018I was burning with the words<br \/>\ngiven by God<br \/>\nI burned for my people<br \/>\nburned in battle<br \/>\nI was burned when betrayed by my king<br \/>\nburned with shame when they made me a witch<br \/>\nand you know of course<br \/>\nabout the English flames\u2019<\/p>\n<p>\u2018So yes,\u2019 she says<br \/>\n\u2018I\u2019d love some more sunscreen\u2019<\/p>\n<p>(c) Helen Rickerby<\/p>\n<p>Published in <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>My Iron Spine<\/strong> <\/span>(Headworx) 2008<\/p>\n<p>&#8212;<\/p>\n<p><strong><a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/12\/rickerbyh.jpg.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-2829\" title=\"rickerbyh.jpg\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/12\/rickerbyh.jpg.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"163\" height=\"200\" \/><\/a>About Helen Rickerby: <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Helen Rickerby is the author of two collections of poetry: <strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Abstract       Internal Furniture<\/span><\/strong> (2001) and <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>My Iron Spine<\/strong> <\/span>(2008),     and recently had a sequence of poems, <strong><em>Heading North<\/em><\/strong>,     published in a hand-bound edition by <strong>Kilmog Press<\/strong>. She is     co-managing editor of <strong>JAAM<\/strong> literary magazine and runs <strong>Seraph Press<\/strong>,     a boutique poetry publisher. She lives in Wellington, in a cliff-top     tower, and works as a web editor.<\/p>\n<p>To find out more about Helen and her wonderful poetry, you may visit her on her blog <em><strong><a href=\"http:\/\/wingedink.blogspot.com\/2010\/12\/tuesday-poem-going-back-by-tim-jones.html\">Winged Ink<\/a>. <\/strong><\/em>To read her guest post on the recently released\u00a0 <a href=\"http:\/\/jaam.wordpress.com\/2010\/11\/18\/jaam-28-dances-out-into-the-world\/\"><strong>JAAM 28: <em>Dance Dance Dance<\/em><\/strong><\/a>, which she co-edited, click <a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2010\/12\/13\/guest-post-helen-rickerby-jaam-28-dance-dance-dance\/\"><strong>here<\/strong><\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>&#8212;<\/p>\n<p><strong>About the Christmas Exchange:<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Basically, the Christmas Exchange comprises the poets of the <a href=\"http:\/\/tuesdaypoem.blogspot.com\/\"><strong>Tuesday Poem Blog<\/strong><\/a> pairing up and featuring one of the other&#8217;s poems on their site&#8212;all in celebration of the Christmas and New Year festivals!\u00a0 I was delighted to be paired with <a href=\"http:\/\/wingedink.blogspot.com\/\"><strong>Helen Rickerby<\/strong><\/a>, whose poetry I admire immensely, and even more delighted when I read the poems Helen sent me. I liked both of them very much but I have to say that <strong><em>Burning with Joan of Arc<\/em><\/strong> really spun my poetic wheels.<\/p>\n<p>Firstly, because it&#8217;s very powerful poetically&#8212;this is a poem that packs a lot of punch! (Fittingly, of course, for Joan of Arc.)\u00a0  The power is achieved through a number of devices: the use of dialogue and &#8216;voice&#8217;;\u00a0 the spare language juxtaposed with repetition, particularly around &#8220;burned&#8221; and &#8220;burning.&#8221;\u00a0 We all have our personal prejudices and preferences as poets, and one of mine is a wariness of repetition: I find it tires very easily as a device, and risks boring the reader and dragging\u00a0 a poem into the banal. But in this poem it works perfectly&#8212;so much so that it was only on the second reading that I even noticed that there was repetiton.\u00a0 (At first reading I just went: wow.&#8221;)<\/p>\n<p>I really don&#8217;t like breaking poems down&#8212;if they work as a whole then that&#8217;s good enough for the Lowe gal!\u00a0 And this poem definitely works as a whole. But because this is the Christmas Exchange I want to talk about\u00a0 a couple of other aspects that make <em><strong>Burning with Joan of Arc <\/strong><\/em>rock for me. For example, how quickly and effectively Helen creates the atmosphere of the poem through words such as &#8220;yellow&#8221;, &#8220;palm&#8221; and &#8220;scorching&#8221; in the first stanza; then the way in which she juxtaposes the macro story of Joan of Arc, her life and death, with the minutiae of the beach expereince: sunbathing and a conversation around sunscreen. The latter gives bathos to the former, but in such an understated way that as a reader you don&#8217;t see it coming&#8212;and even after it&#8217;s gone the effect is so neat that rather than flagellating over the glory and tragedy and injustice of Joan of Arc&#8217;s life, you are left simply with a feeling of satisfaction: for the poem well conceived and delivered, as well as for the &#8220;story&#8221; effectively told.<\/p>\n<p>For those who might argue that it is not a NZ Christmas poem: of course it is! NZ Christmas is all about high summer, and beaches, and sunscreen, and <em><strong>Burning <\/strong><\/em>captures that perfectly.\u00a0 Given that Joan of Arc has been canonized as a saint, I also feel that it is timely to reflect that a festival that promises &#8220;peace on earth and good will to all&#8221; has many times delivered &#8220;not peace but a sword&#8221;&#8212;together with the stake, the rack, the wheel, and the cross. Not a reason to turn away from the promise that offers better hope, but an incentive, as individuals and societies, to strive harder to realise it in the world.<\/p>\n<p>And on that note&#8212;enjoy Helen Rickerby&#8217;s <em><strong>Burning with Joan of Arc.<\/strong><\/em><\/p>\n<p>To enjoy more Tuesday Poems as part of the international Christmas exchange, go to the <strong>Tuesday Poem Blog<\/strong> hub <a href=\"http:\/\/tuesdaypoem.blogspot.com\/\"><strong>here<\/strong><\/a> or click on the Quill icon in the sidebar.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Burning with Joan of Arc The yellow sand is hot under my palm Despite my shorts and tee shirt and slatherings of sunscreen I can feel the sun scorching my skin Joan is stretched out beside me sun hat over her face bikinied body idolatrous worshipping the sun \u2018More sunscreen?\u2019 I ask \u2018I\u2019ve already burned,\u2019 [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[14,6],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-2822","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-other-writers","category-poetry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2822","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=2822"}],"version-history":[{"count":19,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2822\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":2841,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2822\/revisions\/2841"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=2822"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=2822"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=2822"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}