{"id":29713,"date":"2015-07-30T06:30:30","date_gmt":"2015-07-29T18:30:30","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/?p=29713"},"modified":"2015-07-28T20:34:41","modified_gmt":"2015-07-28T08:34:41","slug":"writing-epic-heroines-the-princess-others-in-thornspell","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2015\/07\/30\/writing-epic-heroines-the-princess-others-in-thornspell\/","title":{"rendered":"Writing Epic Heroines: The Princess &#038; Others In &#8220;Thornspell&#8221;"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2011\/08\/04\/fun-with-thornspell\/thornspell-cover-illustration-2\/\" rel=\"attachment wp-att-7163\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-medium wp-image-7163\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/08\/Thornspell-cover-illustration-211x300.jpg\" alt=\"Thornspell cover illustration\" width=\"211\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/08\/Thornspell-cover-illustration-211x300.jpg 211w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/08\/Thornspell-cover-illustration-105x150.jpg 105w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/08\/Thornspell-cover-illustration-723x1024.jpg 723w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 211px) 100vw, 211px\" \/><\/a>Last week I discussed <a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2015\/07\/23\/writing-epic-heroines\/\" target=\"_blank\">Writing Epic Heroines<\/a>, mainly in the context of the <a href=\"http:\/\/www.helenlowe.info\/wallofnight.html\" target=\"_blank\">Wall Of Night<\/a> series.<\/p>\n<p>But<a href=\"http:\/\/www.thornspell.info\/\" target=\"_blank\"> <strong><em>Thornspell<\/em><\/strong><\/a>, as a fairytale retelling, presented a unique challenge in terms of writing heroines.<\/p>\n<p>The fairytale, you see, is Sleeping Beauty, the retelling told from the point of view of the prince who breaks the spell&#8212;and I quickly realized that 21<sup>st<\/sup> century readers were just not going to \u201cbuy\u201d the traditional ending.<\/p>\n<p>You know the one: where the prince wakes the princess with the magical kiss, they fall instantly in love and live happily ever after. (And then there is the Grimm version, but <em>Thornspell<\/em> is Junior fiction\u2026)<\/p>\n<p>At any rate, I realized that I was going to have to both generate other heroines within the story&#8212;and also find a way to focus on the princess a lot earlier in the book. Which I did &#8230;<\/p>\n<p>The other aspect of writing heroines in <strong><em>Thornspell<\/em><\/strong> arose from the fact that it&#8217;s a retelling from the point of view of the prince. Naturally, this means he has to be the main character. And since he is a boy growing up in the late-medieval era of this world, a number of the influential characters around him are also men, most notably his master-at-arms, the enigmatic Balisan.<\/p>\n<p>The arch-nemesis of the tale is the wicked fae, who although undoubtedly epic is also a villainess, the <a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2015\/02\/20\/ruffians-and-roughnecks-the-villain-or-in-this-case-villainess\/\" target=\"_blank\">Margravine <em>zu<\/em> Malvolin<\/a>. So I felt it was important to have some equally strong but positive female characters into the story&#8212;an impetus that dovetailed with the need to have a cast of heroines <em>other<\/em> than the sleeping princess.<\/p>\n<p>One obvious choice was the good fairy whose magic converted the original death spell into the one hundred years&#8217; sleep: Syrica, in this book. She was joined by Auld Hazel, the witch of the wood, and two serving girls: a mute called Rue who becomes one of the prince&#8217;s more unexpected allies, and a childhood companion, Annie. And then, of course, there&#8217;s the sleeping princess who has to be present, rather than absent, in the story &#8230;<\/p>\n<p>As I wrote <a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2015\/07\/23\/writing-epic-heroines\/\" target=\"_blank\">last week<\/a>, <em>&#8220;<\/em>listening<em> to the story and being open to possibility are always key to developing characters.&#8221; <\/em>In developing <strong><em>Thornspell<\/em><\/strong>, the process of listening involved being open to the needs of the story as it evolved, while being guided by the classic story without rigidly adhering to its form&#8211;which allowed both the cast of heroines, but also other characters such as Balisan, to evolve and step forward naturally, taking their place on the page.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Last week I discussed Writing Epic Heroines, mainly in the context of the Wall Of Night series. But Thornspell, as a fairytale retelling, presented a unique challenge in terms of writing heroines. 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