{"id":36434,"date":"2019-02-18T06:30:55","date_gmt":"2019-02-17T17:30:55","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/?p=36434"},"modified":"2019-02-17T15:12:38","modified_gmt":"2019-02-17T02:12:38","slug":"on-worldbuilding","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2019\/02\/18\/on-worldbuilding\/","title":{"rendered":"On Worldbuilding"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-thumbnail wp-image-36405\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/01\/Helen_Lowe_TWON_fan_495w-150x112.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"150\" height=\"112\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/01\/Helen_Lowe_TWON_fan_495w-150x112.png 150w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/01\/Helen_Lowe_TWON_fan_495w-300x224.png 300w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/01\/Helen_Lowe_TWON_fan_495w.png 495w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 150px) 100vw, 150px\" \/>Recently on Good Reads (GR) I was asked a question about worldbuilding. I\u2019m not terribly active on GR because there\u2019s only so much social media a gal can do in a meaningful way and still write books and deal with realtime life, so questions are a relatively rare event. \ud83d\ude09<\/p>\n<p>In this case, Zainab\u2019s question was about worldbuilding and I thought required a little more thought than just a dashed off reply. I also thought others might find it interesting, so decided to share m\u2019terribly important thoughts as a blog post. \ud83d\ude42<\/p>\n<p>Zainab was nice enough to say some complimentary things about my worldbuilding in the WALL series [twinkles] but I\u2019ll focus on the key question:<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #003366;\"><em>\u201cCan you give any tips on how to construct a\u2026how do I put it\u2026believable world? I\u2019m finding it a bit trying\u2026\u201d<\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p>From one perspective this is a hard ask, because my worldbuilding is more intuitive than cerebral. By which I mean that I perceive the world really vividly and that\u2019s what I write and develop in concert with the action of the story, rather than sitting down in advance and nutting out the detail of the world.<\/p>\n<p>However, I still think there are some key elements incorporated into this approach that I can identify and which may help other worldbuilders, even those who prefer a more cerebral approach.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_3149\" style=\"width: 160px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-3149\" class=\"wp-image-3149 size-thumbnail\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/01\/wallofnight_map_small-150x150.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"150\" height=\"150\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-3149\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">May include maps&#8230; (Design by Peter Fitzpatrick)<\/p><\/div>\n<h2><strong>Experimentation:<\/strong><\/h2>\n<p>Just as we\u2019re all different in other ways, so too with worldbuilding: there isna going to be a \u201cone size fits all\u201d approach. If in doubt, though, try experimenting \u2013 approaching the worldbuilding in several different ways, e.g.:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Think about the most compelling aspect of your world and write an opening scene that explores that and see how your thinking and the story evolves from there;<\/li>\n<li>Storyboard your world, i.e. sit down and map out how the world works in advance, using not only maps of terrain but also images of how it looks re landscape, architecture, people, their clothes etc<\/li>\n<li>Have some key headings such as: planet; continents; countries; geography; landscapes; vegetation; creatures; people; societies; culture; religion; technology; water, food, and other key resources. (And so on.) But even if you don\u2019t feature all or any of them exhaustively in your story, <em>you <\/em>as author have to have an idea how they fit together \u2013 or even to consciously decide they don\u2019t matter to your particular story at all so you can dispense with worldbuilding altogether.<\/li>\n<li>Daydream it: think about your world even when you\u2019re not actually working on it. Allow it to colonize your mind and \u2018doodle\u2019 your ideas even when you don\u2019t have time to write or world-build in earnest. (Keeping a notebook of some kind is really helpful for this.)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2><strong>Approaches <\/strong><\/h2>\n<p>In terms of the elements you\u2019re exploring, though, and what you\u2019re trying to achieve with your worldbuilding, here are a few more things to consider \/ play around with:<\/p>\n<h3><strong>The Big Idea<img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-full wp-image-11809\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/02\/heirofnightcover_small.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"140\" height=\"202\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/02\/heirofnightcover_small.jpg 140w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/02\/heirofnightcover_small-103x150.jpg 103w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 140px) 100vw, 140px\" \/><\/strong><\/h3>\n<p>I think it really helps to have a \u201cbig idea\u201d that informs your world and therefore your worldbuilding. In <a href=\"http:\/\/helenlowe.info\/wallofnight.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><strong>The Wall Of Night<\/strong><\/a> series the original big idea was \u201cdarkness\u201d \u2013 the idea of a \u201cnight world\u201d in which the central protagonist\/antagonist peoples are locked in age-old conflict. It was very influenced by my first reading of Norse myths (i.e. Diegotterdamerung: the twilight of the Gods) and also by books such as Alan Garner\u2019s more Celtic influenced <em>Elidor<\/em> and \u2013 a little later \u2013 by Tolkien\u2019s Beleriand in the backstory to <em>The Lord of the Rings<\/em>. (In its turn very influenced by Norse myth again, so there\u2019s a certain circularity\u2026)<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft wp-image-4522 size-thumbnail\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/gameofthronesp-88x150.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"88\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/gameofthronesp-88x150.jpg 88w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/gameofthronesp.jpg 142w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 88px) 100vw, 88px\" \/>As I grew up and my original world idea developed, I realized that a dark world, while atmospheric, made for challenging worldbuilding and difficult storytelling, so I revised the \u201cdarkness\u201d back to more of a twilit world, with an accompanying stark and bleak landscape, that became the Wall of Night. I also originally thought the wall would be an actual constructed wall (like the Nightwatch\u2019s Wall of Ice in <strong><em>A Game of Thrones<\/em><\/strong>) but the more I thought about it the more the \u201cmountain range as shield-wall\u201d idea took hold.<\/p>\n<p>At which point I started writing, with the idea of the Wall shaping the Derai as they are first encountered, although as quickly becomes clear the Derai originally shaped the Wall, so \u201cwhich came first\u201d in terms of influence is by no means clearcut.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-thumbnail wp-image-6592 alignright\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/riddlemaster_of_hed_3-97x150.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"97\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/riddlemaster_of_hed_3-97x150.jpg 97w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/riddlemaster_of_hed_3-195x300.jpg 195w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/07\/riddlemaster_of_hed_3.jpg 309w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 97px) 100vw, 97px\" \/>Other \u201cBig Ideas\u201d I (believe I) perceive in Fantasy worldbuilding, which pervade the stories, include:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u201cWinter is Coming\u201d \u2013 in George RR Martin\u2019s <strong>A Song Of Ice and Fire<\/strong> series (aka <em>A Game Of Thrones<\/em>)<\/li>\n<li>\u201cThe Everstorm\u201d \u2013 in Brandon Sanderson\u2019s <strong>Stormlight Archive<\/strong> series<\/li>\n<li>\u201cLand heirdom\u201d \u2013 in Patricia McKillip\u2019s <strong>The Riddlemaster of Hed <\/strong>series<\/li>\n<li>The four elements of fire, earth, air, and water \u2013 in Midori Snyder\u2019s <strong>Orans\u2019 Cradle<\/strong> series<\/li>\n<li>The language of music \u2013 in Anna Smaill\u2019s <strong><em>The Chimes<\/em><\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3><strong>Choose A \u201cSpine\u201d for Your Worldbuilding<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-thumbnail wp-image-29128\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/Tigana-92x150.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"92\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/Tigana-92x150.jpg 92w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/Tigana-184x300.jpg 184w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/Tigana.jpg 306w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 92px) 100vw, 92px\" \/>If you think of a world as being similar to a human body, the spine is the central column, or core idea, that connects everything else.<\/p>\n<p>Some of the key elements that are drawn upon for speculative fiction worldbuilding include:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>History:<\/strong> especially taking a particular period such as renaissance Italy in Guy Gavriel Kay\u2019s <strong><em>Tigana<\/em><\/strong>; the Carolingian era of European medieval history in Kate Elliot\u2019s <strong>Crown of Stars<\/strong> series; medieval Korea in Raymond E Feist and Janny Wurts <strong>Empire<\/strong> trilogy; and colonial North America in Orson Scott Card\u2019s <strong>Alvin Maker<\/strong> series.<\/li>\n<li>\n<div id=\"attachment_9411\" style=\"width: 120px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-9411\" class=\"wp-image-9411 size-thumbnail\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/11\/Maps-of-Tolkiens-Middle-Earth-110x150.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"110\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/11\/Maps-of-Tolkiens-Middle-Earth-110x150.jpg 110w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/11\/Maps-of-Tolkiens-Middle-Earth.jpg 131w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 110px) 100vw, 110px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-9411\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Outstandingly influential worldbuilding<\/p><\/div>\n<p><strong>Science:<\/strong> such as the strong emphasis on biology in Julie Czerneda\u2019s worlds and again with Sanderson\u2019s Everstorm and everything that flows from that; or music, its language and structure, in Anna Smaill\u2019s <em>The Chimes<\/em>.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Geography\/Nature:<\/strong> outstanding examples include JRR Tolkien\u2019s <strong>Middle Earth<\/strong> where a strong vision of nature and its forms shapes the characters\u2019\u2014and the readers\u2019\u2014experience of the world; also Ursula K Le Guin\u2019s <strong>Earthsea and the archipelago<\/strong>, and Mary Victoria\u2019s <strong>world tree<\/strong> in <em>Tymon\u2019s Flight <\/em>(<strong>Chronicles of the Tree<\/strong> series.)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3><strong>Live It, Breathe It, <em>Experience<\/em> Your World: Make It Sensory<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-thumbnail wp-image-9855\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/11\/way_of_kings1_uk-97x150.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"97\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/11\/way_of_kings1_uk-97x150.png 97w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/11\/way_of_kings1_uk.png 130w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 97px) 100vw, 97px\" \/>In order for the world to be real for readers, it must first be real in your mind so that the characters can experience their surroundings in a real way.<\/p>\n<p>One really important way of doing that is to remember that the characters must experience through their five senses, i.e. the reader must also know what the characters are <strong><em>seeing; hearing; smelling; touching<\/em>;<\/strong> and \u2013 where appropriate \u2013 <strong><em>tasting<\/em><\/strong>.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-thumbnail wp-image-4838 alignleft\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/tymonsflight-91x150.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"91\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/tymonsflight-91x150.jpg 91w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/tymonsflight-183x300.jpg 183w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/tymonsflight-627x1024.jpg 627w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/tymonsflight.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 91px) 100vw, 91px\" \/>Yet it is not enough to simply experience, the characters must also <strong>respond emotionally<\/strong> to what they experience. For example, in any given situation, does the character feel fear or horror, foreboding or doubt; happiness or confidence? Do they respond to stimuli with joy and delight, or disgust and loathing?<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-thumbnail wp-image-35433\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/05\/Crown-of-Stars_Elliott-92x150.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"92\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/05\/Crown-of-Stars_Elliott-92x150.jpg 92w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/05\/Crown-of-Stars_Elliott-184x300.jpg 184w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/05\/Crown-of-Stars_Elliott.jpg 291w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 92px) 100vw, 92px\" \/>The reality of the worldbuilding will help you, as author, to know how your characters respond. It will also help your readers not only understand what\u2019s going on for your characters, but to understand environment and world through their senses and perceptions, i.e. the world becomes real for all involved.<\/p>\n<p>And that\u2019s it: I don\u2019t think there\u2019s a great deal more I can say in terms of a few quick tips but I hope something in here will help. \ud83d\ude42<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-thumbnail wp-image-36092\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/10\/Daughter-of-the-Empire-98x150.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"98\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/10\/Daughter-of-the-Empire-98x150.jpg 98w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/10\/Daughter-of-the-Empire-196x300.jpg 196w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/10\/Daughter-of-the-Empire.jpg 311w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 98px) 100vw, 98px\" \/><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-thumbnail wp-image-4682\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/Earthsea1-91x150.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"91\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/Earthsea1-91x150.jpg 91w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/Earthsea1-182x300.jpg 182w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/04\/Earthsea1.jpg 304w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 91px) 100vw, 91px\" \/><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-thumbnail wp-image-34760\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/10\/A-Turn-Of-Light-99x150.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"99\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/10\/A-Turn-Of-Light-99x150.jpg 99w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/10\/A-Turn-Of-Light-198x300.jpg 198w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2017\/10\/A-Turn-Of-Light.jpg 314w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 99px) 100vw, 99px\" \/><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-thumbnail wp-image-32503\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/New-Moon-95x150.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"95\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/New-Moon-95x150.jpg 95w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/New-Moon-191x300.jpg 191w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/New-Moon.jpg 220w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 95px) 100vw, 95px\" \/><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-thumbnail wp-image-35965\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Seventh-Son-88x150.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"88\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Seventh-Son-88x150.jpg 88w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Seventh-Son-176x300.jpg 176w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2018\/09\/Seventh-Son.jpg 278w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 88px) 100vw, 88px\" \/><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-thumbnail wp-image-28207\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/02\/Chimes_The-97x150.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"97\" height=\"150\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/02\/Chimes_The-97x150.jpg 97w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/02\/Chimes_The-195x300.jpg 195w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/02\/Chimes_The-668x1024.jpg 668w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/02\/Chimes_The.jpg 1045w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 97px) 100vw, 97px\" \/><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #ffffff;\">.<\/span><\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<pre><span style=\"color: #333333;\">\u00a9 Helen Lowe, <em>On Worldbuilding<\/em>.<\/span><\/pre>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Recently on Good Reads (GR) I was asked a question about worldbuilding. I\u2019m not terribly active on GR because there\u2019s only so much social media a gal can do in a meaningful way and still write books and deal with realtime life, so questions are a relatively rare event. \ud83d\ude09 In this case, Zainab\u2019s question [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[50,30],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-36434","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-about-writing","category-epicfantasy"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/36434","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=36434"}],"version-history":[{"count":20,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/36434\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":36456,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/36434\/revisions\/36456"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=36434"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=36434"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=36434"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}