{"id":41013,"date":"2023-05-01T06:30:40","date_gmt":"2023-04-30T18:30:40","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/?p=41013"},"modified":"2023-04-30T20:18:57","modified_gmt":"2023-04-30T08:18:57","slug":"revision-ho","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2023\/05\/01\/revision-ho\/","title":{"rendered":"Revision Ho!"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>So-o, <a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2023\/04\/27\/real-news-a-wall-4-update\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">on Thursday<\/a> I &#8216;fessed up to having typed &#8220;the end&#8221; on the &#8220;beginning-to-end&#8221; of the final <a href=\"http:\/\/helenlowe.info\/wallofnight.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">The Wall Of Night<\/a> manuscript. \ud83d\ude00<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-41024\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/Fantasy_HelenLoweBooks_image_1-300x241.jpeg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"241\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/Fantasy_HelenLoweBooks_image_1-300x241.jpeg 300w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/Fantasy_HelenLoweBooks_image_1-150x120.jpeg 150w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/Fantasy_HelenLoweBooks_image_1.jpeg 502w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/p>\n<p>I believe it&#8217;s <em>the<\/em> most important milestone in getting a book into readers&#8217; hands &#8212; but as indicated Thursday, now it&#8217;s &#8216;game on!&#8217; for the next round, which is basically revise-revamp-repeat.*<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-40767\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/01\/NovelistAs-A-Vocation_Haruki-Murakami-183x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"159\" height=\"261\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/01\/NovelistAs-A-Vocation_Haruki-Murakami-183x300.jpg 183w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/01\/NovelistAs-A-Vocation_Haruki-Murakami-92x150.jpg 92w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/01\/NovelistAs-A-Vocation_Haruki-Murakami-768x1257.jpg 768w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/01\/NovelistAs-A-Vocation_Haruki-Murakami-626x1024.jpg 626w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/01\/NovelistAs-A-Vocation_Haruki-Murakami.jpg 1587w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 159px) 100vw, 159px\" \/><\/p>\n<p>This is probably my favourite part of the writing process. To quote Haruki Murakami &#8212; and by extension, Raymond Carver &#8212;\u00a0 (with approval):<\/p>\n<p><em><span style=\"color: #003366;\">\u2018 \u201cI take time to rewrite &#8230; Rewriting is my favourite part of writing. The first time is a kind of torture, sometimes. Raymond Carver [whose work Murakami has translated into Japanese] said the same thing. I met him and I talked with him in 1983 or 84, and he said: \u2018The first draft is kind of torture, but when you rewrite it\u2019s getting better, so you are happy\u2026\u201d &#8216;<\/span><br \/>\n<\/em><\/p>\n<p>I also take heart from the fact that I don&#8217;t believe there is anything in the current w.i.p. that comes close to matching the confused jumble that was my first cut at\u00a0 &#8216;Part IV: The Bride of Blood in <em><a href=\"http:\/\/helenlowe.info\/daughterofblood.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">Daughter of Blood<\/a>.&#8217; (<\/em>No, it definitely didn&#8217;t spring fully fledged onto the page!)<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_29607\" style=\"width: 169px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-29607\" class=\"wp-image-29607 \" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/07\/Daughter-of-Blood-by-Helen-Lowe-190x300.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"159\" height=\"251\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/07\/Daughter-of-Blood-by-Helen-Lowe-190x300.png 190w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/07\/Daughter-of-Blood-by-Helen-Lowe-95x150.png 95w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/07\/Daughter-of-Blood-by-Helen-Lowe-650x1024.png 650w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/07\/Daughter-of-Blood-by-Helen-Lowe.png 742w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 159px) 100vw, 159px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-29607\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">UK\/AU\/NZ<\/p><\/div>\n<p>So here&#8217;s to Carver&#8217;s happiness and getting on with the revise-revamp-repeat (and finally complete!) &#8220;interfrastically&#8221; (to quote Winnie-the-Pooh.)<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">~*~<\/p>\n<pre>* Repeating the revising and revamping, that is \u2014 a part of which will be removing all\r\n but <em>intended<\/em> repetition.<\/pre>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>So-o, on Thursday I &#8216;fessed up to having typed &#8220;the end&#8221; on the &#8220;beginning-to-end&#8221; of the final The Wall Of Night manuscript. \ud83d\ude00 I believe it&#8217;s the most important milestone in getting a book into readers&#8217; hands &#8212; but as indicated Thursday, now it&#8217;s &#8216;game on!&#8217; for the next round, which is basically revise-revamp-repeat.* This [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[8,23,14],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-41013","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-about-my-books","category-about-what-im-doing","category-other-writers"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/41013","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=41013"}],"version-history":[{"count":15,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/41013\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":41029,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/41013\/revisions\/41029"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=41013"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=41013"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=41013"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}