{"id":43095,"date":"2025-06-09T06:30:22","date_gmt":"2025-06-08T18:30:22","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/?p=43095"},"modified":"2025-06-08T20:13:57","modified_gmt":"2025-06-08T08:13:57","slug":"update-the-wall-of-night-4-revision-part-1-done","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2025\/06\/09\/update-the-wall-of-night-4-revision-part-1-done\/","title":{"rendered":"Update: The Wall Of Night #4 Revision &#8212; Part 1 Done"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>First of all, I&#8217;d really like to thank you all for your patience, as I know many of you have been hanging out for an update. I also apologise, because I know it&#8217;s been a long time coming.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_20854\" style=\"width: 119px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-20854\" class=\"wp-image-20854 size-medium\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/06\/Daughter-of-Blood-Tile-109x300.jpg\" alt=\"The-Chaos-Gate-The-Wall-Of-Night-Book-Four\" width=\"109\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/06\/Daughter-of-Blood-Tile-109x300.jpg 109w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/06\/Daughter-of-Blood-Tile-54x150.jpg 54w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 109px) 100vw, 109px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-20854\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">It&#8217;s update time&#8230;<\/p><\/div>\n<p>As you know, I wanted to do the update when I had something tangible to report &#8212; beyond <em>&#8220;still revising, not done yet&#8221;<\/em>, that is. So I was as frustrated as any of you when getting to a stage where I could finally say &#8220;the milestone-in-progress is &#8216;definitely done&#8217; &#8221; took far longer than I ever envisaged.<\/p>\n<p><strong>To Recap<\/strong><br \/>\nAs you will know from earlier posts, when I embarked on what was the &#8216;next milestone&#8217;, I was coming out of what I call &#8220;the zig-zag&#8221;, which involved the resolution of multiple different narrative versions into one integrated whole. As also noted previously, &#8220;the zig-zag&#8221; comprised the bulk, but not all, of the first half of the WALL #4 manuscript.<\/p>\n<p>So at that point, I was embarking on what I believed would be a small bridging section (ha! said the Muses) and revision of the final section of the first half of the manuscript.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_20348\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-20348\" class=\"wp-image-20348 size-medium\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/05\/King-Country-landscape-3-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/05\/King-Country-landscape-3-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/05\/King-Country-landscape-3-150x112.jpg 150w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/05\/King-Country-landscape-3.jpg 653w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-20348\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Not so much this&#8230;<\/p><\/div>\n<p><strong>And Then&#8230;<\/strong><br \/>\nThe main reason it has taken so long, is that I quickly realized the &#8220;bridging section&#8221;, given preceding changes, was no longer fit for purpose and needed to be completely rewritten. This resulted in consequential, or flow-on, changes to both the preceding and following sections of the manuscript. Definitely an &#8220;Ack!&#8221; moment, with the resultant hiatus between concrete updates.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_28989\" style=\"width: 235px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-28989\" class=\"wp-image-28989 size-medium\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/2015-04-19-15.07.41a-225x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"225\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/2015-04-19-15.07.41a-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/2015-04-19-15.07.41a-113x150.jpg 113w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/2015-04-19-15.07.41a.jpg 490w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 225px) 100vw, 225px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-28989\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">&#8230; as this<\/p><\/div>\n<p><strong>The Update<br \/>\n<\/strong>The good news is that all those tasks are definitely wrapped up now, so I do have something concrete to report &#8212; which is that the first half of the manuscript is done. Yes, really and truly done.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_26266\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-26266\" class=\"wp-image-26266 size-medium\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/07\/Its-edit-time-300x180.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"180\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/07\/Its-edit-time-300x180.jpg 300w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/07\/Its-edit-time-150x90.jpg 150w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/07\/Its-edit-time.jpg 511w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-26266\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Yep, there were &#8216;days like this&#8217;<\/p><\/div>\n<p>You may, quite rightly, point out that the second half remains outstanding. However, the structure of the WALL 4 manuscript is what in art would be called a diptych &#8212; and in literary terms, too, since the original meaning was a two<span class=\"dt \"><span class=\"dtText\">-leaved hinged tablet folding together to protect the interior. So because the WALL #4 story falls into two distinct, but hinged, parts in the same way, that&#8217;s why I can say &#8220;Yep, done&#8221; to Part 1.<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_43098\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-43098\" class=\"wp-image-43098 size-medium\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/Roman-tablet_stylus_Wikipedia-Commons-300x200.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"200\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/Roman-tablet_stylus_Wikipedia-Commons-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/Roman-tablet_stylus_Wikipedia-Commons-150x100.jpg 150w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/06\/Roman-tablet_stylus_Wikipedia-Commons.jpg 500w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-43098\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Roman style diptych table_Wikimedia Commons<\/p><\/div>\n<p><strong>What Follows Now<br \/>\n<\/strong>No time for slacking off, that&#8217;s what. Instead it&#8217;s straight on to Part 2. You may recall that I have already substantially revised the final section, and the overall manuscript has always been more intact than Part 1.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_7848\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-7848\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-7848\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/08\/Snow-Copyedit-006-300x216.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"216\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/08\/Snow-Copyedit-006-300x216.jpg 300w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/08\/Snow-Copyedit-006-150x108.jpg 150w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/08\/Snow-Copyedit-006-1024x738.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-7848\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Knocking off those sections, one by one&#8230;<\/p><\/div>\n<p>Accordingly, I do entertain hope that the revision will be more straightforward. Although in saying that, you will know the drill, which is that a weather eye must always be kept on Mt Parnassus, and libations poured to the Muses, that they may prove kind.<\/p>\n<p>So please do feel free to pour many, and liberal, libations. \ud83d\ude00 Meanwhile, I shall&#8212;to use a Japanese term&#8212;continue to gambaru with Part 2.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Future Updates<br \/>\n<\/strong>Future updates will be on each section of Part 2 as I complete them. I&#8217;ll report on them here, under <a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/category\/about-my-books\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">About My Books<\/a> and <a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/category\/about-what-im-doing\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">About What I&#8217;m Doing<\/a>, as that occurs. Onward!<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_24411\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-24411\" class=\"wp-image-24411 size-medium\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/02\/Korra1-300x168.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"168\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/02\/Korra1-300x168.jpg 300w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/02\/Korra1-150x84.jpg 150w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/02\/Korra1.jpg 675w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-24411\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">I shall channel my inner Korra \ud83d\ude09<\/p><\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>First of all, I&#8217;d really like to thank you all for your patience, as I know many of you have been hanging out for an update. I also apologise, because I know it&#8217;s been a long time coming. As you know, I wanted to do the update when I had something tangible to report &#8212; [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[8,23],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-43095","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-about-my-books","category-about-what-im-doing"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/43095","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=43095"}],"version-history":[{"count":7,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/43095\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":43103,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/43095\/revisions\/43103"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=43095"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=43095"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=43095"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}