{"id":43418,"date":"2025-10-30T06:30:48","date_gmt":"2025-10-29T17:30:48","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/?p=43418"},"modified":"2025-10-28T20:32:04","modified_gmt":"2025-10-28T07:32:04","slug":"inside-the-revision","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2025\/10\/30\/inside-the-revision\/","title":{"rendered":"Inside The Revision"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>&#8220;Inside The Revision&#8221; being a subset of &#8220;Inside the Writing Life.&#8221; \ud83d\ude00 (As it were; so to speak&#8230;)<\/p>\n<p>With any manuscript revision, there&#8217;s always lots of checking, particularly around set up from the previous books &#8212; not to mention what characters said and did, or how magic worked, or settings and other worldbuilding detail.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-36405\" src=\"https:\/\/csse-dmz-test1.canterbury.ac.nz\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/01\/Helen_Lowe_TWON_fan_495w-300x224.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"224\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/01\/Helen_Lowe_TWON_fan_495w-300x224.png 300w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/01\/Helen_Lowe_TWON_fan_495w-150x112.png 150w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/01\/Helen_Lowe_TWON_fan_495w.png 495w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/p>\n<p>Now that I&#8217;m not only working on the last book, but the final half of the last book, with wrap-ups and resolves very much the order of the day, the fact checking has also increased exponentially.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_30067\" style=\"width: 170px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-30067\" class=\" wp-image-30067\" src=\"https:\/\/csse-dmz-test1.canterbury.ac.nz\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/09\/HeirofNight_new_small-186x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"160\" height=\"258\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/09\/HeirofNight_new_small.jpg 186w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/09\/HeirofNight_new_small-93x150.jpg 93w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 160px) 100vw, 160px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-30067\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">USA<\/p><\/div>\n<p>By way of an example, today I was leafing back through HEIR to check on translocation and portal use, <em>and<\/em> DAUGHTER, just to refresh on various aspects of the epilogue.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_11181\" style=\"width: 170px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-11181\" class=\" wp-image-11181\" src=\"https:\/\/csse-dmz-test1.canterbury.ac.nz\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/01\/bigheirofnightMMUK3-190x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"160\" height=\"253\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/01\/bigheirofnightMMUK3-190x300.jpg 190w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/01\/bigheirofnightMMUK3-95x150.jpg 95w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/01\/bigheirofnightMMUK3-651x1024.jpg 651w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/01\/bigheirofnightMMUK3.jpg 1000w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 160px) 100vw, 160px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-11181\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">UK\/AU\/NZ<\/p><\/div>\n<p>All in a revision day&#8217;s work, but it always repays the effort. <em>Sometimes<\/em>, because I realise whatever I&#8217;m checking is out of sync.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_29736\" style=\"width: 170px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-29736\" class=\" wp-image-29736\" src=\"https:\/\/csse-dmz-test1.canterbury.ac.nz\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/Daughter-of-Blood_Front-Cover-186x300.jpg\" alt=\"daughter-of-blood-by-helen-lowe\" width=\"160\" height=\"258\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/Daughter-of-Blood_Front-Cover-186x300.jpg 186w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/Daughter-of-Blood_Front-Cover-93x150.jpg 93w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/08\/Daughter-of-Blood_Front-Cover.jpg 409w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 160px) 100vw, 160px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-29736\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">USA<\/p><\/div>\n<p>But <em>others<\/em> because I have the reward of finding that, yep, something set up in Book One is playing out exactly as envisaged. (Awesome: high five all round with the Muses. \ud83d\ude09 )<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_29607\" style=\"width: 170px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-29607\" class=\" wp-image-29607\" src=\"https:\/\/csse-dmz-test1.canterbury.ac.nz\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/07\/Daughter-of-Blood-by-Helen-Lowe-190x300.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"160\" height=\"253\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/07\/Daughter-of-Blood-by-Helen-Lowe-190x300.png 190w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/07\/Daughter-of-Blood-by-Helen-Lowe-95x150.png 95w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/07\/Daughter-of-Blood-by-Helen-Lowe-650x1024.png 650w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/07\/Daughter-of-Blood-by-Helen-Lowe.png 742w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 160px) 100vw, 160px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-29607\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">UK\/AU\/NZ<\/p><\/div>\n<p>Check, check, check again, then onward, like Tolkien&#8217;s road in <em>The Lord of The Rings<\/em>.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_9411\" style=\"width: 141px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-9411\" class=\"size-full wp-image-9411\" src=\"https:\/\/csse-dmz-test1.canterbury.ac.nz\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/11\/Maps-of-Tolkiens-Middle-Earth.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"131\" height=\"178\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/11\/Maps-of-Tolkiens-Middle-Earth.jpg 131w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/11\/Maps-of-Tolkiens-Middle-Earth-110x150.jpg 110w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 131px) 100vw, 131px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-9411\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">The road goes ever on&#8230;<\/p><\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>&#8220;Inside The Revision&#8221; being a subset of &#8220;Inside the Writing Life.&#8221; \ud83d\ude00 (As it were; so to speak&#8230;) With any manuscript revision, there&#8217;s always lots of checking, particularly around set up from the previous books &#8212; not to mention what characters said and did, or how magic worked, or settings and other worldbuilding detail. 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