{"id":43508,"date":"2025-12-22T07:58:51","date_gmt":"2025-12-21T18:58:51","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/?p=43508"},"modified":"2026-01-14T19:54:23","modified_gmt":"2026-01-14T06:54:23","slug":"work-in-progress-update-section-5-of-part-2-of-the-wall-finale-done","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2025\/12\/22\/work-in-progress-update-section-5-of-part-2-of-the-wall-finale-done\/","title":{"rendered":"Work-In-Progress Update: Section 5 (of Part 2 of the WALL Finale) Done"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>&#8220;I know&#8221; &#8212; what&#8217;s with this? Only three weeks since I posted on Section 4 (of WALL finale, Part the Second) being done and dusted, and I&#8217;m already calling it a wrap on Section 5.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-20854\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/06\/Daughter-of-Blood-Tile-109x300.jpg\" alt=\"The-Chaos-Gate-The-Wall-Of-Night-Book-Four\" width=\"109\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/06\/Daughter-of-Blood-Tile-109x300.jpg 109w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/06\/Daughter-of-Blood-Tile-54x150.jpg 54w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 109px) 100vw, 109px\" \/><\/p>\n<p>But so indeed it is, although I <em>have<\/em> toiled mightily in those three weeks to bring you this post. So much so that I have also dealt with the first three chapters of Section 6, chiefly because they clearly, on review, belong in 5.<\/p>\n<p>The reason for the &#8216;quick&#8217; is not because Section 5 is shorter than 4. It actually was, and still is, longer (by ca. 75%) &#8212; but as I mentioned awa&#8217;-aways back on <a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2025\/08\/14\/how-many-sections-a-reader-question-answered\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">August 14<\/a>, <em>&#8220;length alone may not determine how long revision will take: it\u2019s always far more about what\u2019s happening with the narrative and the characters.&#8221;<\/em><\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_26266\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-26266\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-26266\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/07\/Its-edit-time-300x180.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"180\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/07\/Its-edit-time-300x180.jpg 300w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/07\/Its-edit-time-150x90.jpg 150w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/07\/Its-edit-time.jpg 511w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-26266\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Back to this&#8230;<\/p><\/div>\n<p>So Section 5 was far more straightforward in that sense than any of the preceding sections, very probably because&#8212;being the penultimate section* of the whole shebang&#8212;at this stage of the tale all the story threads are coming together. (*Although having said that, there was a very good reason I started the revision with the final section, and it <em>wasn&#8217;t<\/em> because everything in it was cut and dried&#8230;)<\/p>\n<p>Now what&#8217;s left to do? As also noted on <a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2025\/08\/14\/how-many-sections-a-reader-question-answered\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">August 14<\/a>, <em>&#8220;although you may recall that I revised the final section first (because it needed major changes that I wanted to capture while they were fresh in my mind), it must stay on the list. That\u2019s because it will still need consequential changes, whether tweaks or more substantive, to fit with the rest of the revision.&#8221;<\/em><\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_7848\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-7848\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-7848\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/08\/Snow-Copyedit-006-300x216.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"216\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/08\/Snow-Copyedit-006-300x216.jpg 300w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/08\/Snow-Copyedit-006-150x108.jpg 150w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2011\/08\/Snow-Copyedit-006-1024x738.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-7848\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Knocking off those sections, one by one&#8230;<\/p><\/div>\n<p>Consequently, I shall now dive into the sixth and final section of Part 2, which is (of course!) the final section of the whole grand finale. I&#8217;m feeling just a tiny tad excited as I type this, but am striving to keep my feet on the ground, because it&#8217;s not quite time to close the keyboard and lay down the pen yet.<\/p>\n<p>In addition to the consequential changes and final checking over of Section 6, I shall be starting with some new material. As with Section 4, this is also necessitated by changes made earlier in the manuscript.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_33208\" style=\"width: 235px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-33208\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-33208\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/09\/NWF_giveaway-225x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"225\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/09\/NWF_giveaway-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/09\/NWF_giveaway-113x150.jpg 113w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/09\/NWF_giveaway.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 225px) 100vw, 225px\" \/><p id=\"caption-attachment-33208\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">To get to this &#8230; fingers crossed!<\/p><\/div>\n<p>So let&#8217;s see how this goes &#8212; but as promised throughout, I shall not be taking my foot off the pedal, except for Christmas Day and the two either side, for a long-awaited family gathering.<\/p>\n<p>On which note, Merry Merry &#8212; Happy Happy to you all, just in case I miss saying it on the 25th, for any reason. \ud83d\ude00<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-40760 aligncenter\" src=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/01\/Pohutakawa-flowers_small-225x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"225\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/01\/Pohutakawa-flowers_small-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/01\/Pohutakawa-flowers_small-112x150.jpg 112w, https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/01\/Pohutakawa-flowers_small.jpg 443w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 225px) 100vw, 225px\" \/><\/p>\n<h4><strong>Previous WALL #4, Part 2 Updates:<\/strong><\/h4>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2025\/06\/09\/update-the-wall-of-night-4-revision-part-1-done\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">June 9: Part 1 Done<\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2025\/08\/11\/work-in-progress-part-2-update\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">August 11: Section 1,<\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2025\/09\/25\/work-in-progress-update-section-2-of-wall-4-part-2-done\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">September 25: Section 2<\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2025\/10\/13\/work-in-progress-update-section-3-of-part-2-of-the-wall-finale-done\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener noreferrer\">October 13: Section 3<\/a><\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/2025\/12\/01\/work-in-progress-update-section-4-of-part-2-of-the-wall-finale-done\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">December 1: Section 4<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>&#8220;I know&#8221; &#8212; what&#8217;s with this? Only three weeks since I posted on Section 4 (of WALL finale, Part the Second) being done and dusted, and I&#8217;m already calling it a wrap on Section 5. But so indeed it is, although I have toiled mightily in those three weeks to bring you this post. So [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[8,23],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-43508","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-about-my-books","category-about-what-im-doing"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/43508","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=43508"}],"version-history":[{"count":7,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/43508\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":43519,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/43508\/revisions\/43519"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=43508"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=43508"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/helenlowe.info\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=43508"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}