Tuesday Poem: “It’s Over”
All Over
On that first afternoon
it was all about noise:
sirens, the continual tuk-tuk-tuk
of helicopters, and the slow drone
of freight planes airlifting in supplies—noise
and the smell of smoke
hanging in a pall
across the inner suburbs
as the CTV building burned.
But in the days following
I recall the silence of a city
where daily business had all but ceased,
cars off the road, people staying home
or fled—over 70,000 now
the pundits claim, since February 22nd—
and at night the profound darkness
of a power blackout. On the evening
when the street lights blinked back on
we were out walking in the blue dusk:
the light overhead flick-flick-flickered –
and then the whole street
was bathed in a saffron haze,
illuminating the other side
of the road and a friend
outside the wreckage
that had once been her business
My friend’s father, helping her,
had just lost his home, and she,
looking dry-eyed at collapsed bricks,
said simply: “It’s over. It’s all over.”
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© Helen Lowe, 2011
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You paint such a real picture of the scene.
A reader can ‘see’ it.
Thanks, Jan—helping others to “see” and feel the Christchurch experience is definitely part of what I am hoping to achieve with these poems.
Hello Helen, The poignancy of today’s Tuesday Poem ”All Over” has deeply touched me and brought tears to my eyes. I recently spent just over a week in Princess Margaret Hospital on the 5th floor. Each evening, to borrow your own words, “the profound darkness of a power blackout” personifies the “black hole” that has become the centre of our city. It was impossible to disregard as it was so visible from my bed. I would remember the lives lost and the lives and futures that were ruined in such an incredibly short space of time.
I have just [very reluctantly] finished reading “The Heir of the Night” and I really genuinely loved it. This was a library copy but I am now going to have to purchase my very own copy [I am a re-reader} and then I will be waiting with bated breath for The Gathering of the Lost (The Wall of Night Book Two) to be published. It is such brilliant and awesome book and thank you so very much for the hours you have spent and will be spending in the future. Your readers are indeed so privileged to be the recipients of your exceptional talent thank you. I will now set about getting “Thornspell” to read.
Margot, it means a great deal that “All Over” spoke to you so deeply about our shared Christchurch situation. And I am very pleased that you have enjoyed The Heir of Night so much—and doubly pleased that I can assure you that The Gathering of the Lost is definitely on the production line for March 2012. I hope you enjoy Thornspell as much as Heir—Richard Bach’s son James has called it a “very life affirming story” and I think that is a true summation …
This strikes me as the most powerful and poignant of your earthquake poems so far.
Thank you, Catherine: ‘powerful’ and ‘poignant’ are both good words!:)