The Hidden Story …
Recently, in an interview conversation with my friend and fellow author, Mary Victoria, we talked about the writer’s intention in storytelling and also how stories can evolve independently of that.
We did so chiefly in the context of the recently published Daughter of Blood, but Mary also mentioned the — by and large — matter-of-fact equality between men and women in the Wall of Night series’ Derai society.
She also asked whether I intended portraying “a more or less equal playing field for women, certainly women with martial or magical ability in the Derai world?”
My answer was that I did not start out with that fixed intention, but “it was simply the way the story, the society, and the characters deployed on the page of the first book, i.e. you might say that they wrote themselves that way. To be honest, I wasn’t even conscious of it as a distinguishing feature of my work until The Heir of Night, The Wall of Night Book One, was published and reviewers and readers commented on that aspect of the story.”
I think of this as the hidden story, a subtext that may be invisible even to the author when she or he is writing the book. It’s certainly not the first time it has happened in The Wall of Night series. For example, when I finally passed over The Gathering of the Lost to my US editor, Kate Nintzel, she commented on how much it was a story about friendship.
As soon as she said so, I realised that it was true — but up until then that particular aspect of the story as theme had been as invisible to me as the matter-of-fact gender equality of Derai society in The Heir of Night.
Similarly, during the course of our conversation Mary observed that the character of Myr in Daughter of Blood has an “unshakeable moral core.” Although I had fully intended to explore different aspects of what constitutes “strength” through Myr’s arc, Mary’s observation made me think “yes” to an “unshakeable moral core” being a large part of the character’s resilience. But as I pointed out, it was not a tag I had attached to her character from the beginning…
In short, she grew through the telling of the story, but because the process of storytelling is organic, my thinking was centered on the whole character and her natural development/evolution, rather than necessarily consciously breaking that down into component characteristics as I wrote.
Which is how, I believe, the tales we tell can have “hidden stories” that it takes a third party to put their finger on and say, “Ah — it may be about this and this, but it’s also about that.”
Whereupon I, as author, nod and reply: “Yes, of course, it is.”
You may think I am being quite sanguine about this process, but to me it is inevitable that with anything as complex as a book, not only the conscious but also the subconscious mind will be playing a part in its development. The fact that they do and that there can be multiple and potentially hidden layers within a story is all part of the magic of storytelling.
Reading this post, I realize I love Myr for the same reasons I love Maia from Katherine Addison’s The Goblin Emperor. Despite fear and some really nasty internal self-talk, they are both trying to make the best decision they possibly can. They are both, at heart, incredibly fair-minded individuals, who just want to be GOOD. And I love them. If you haven’t read The Goblin Emperor, all me to recommend it!
I haven’t read The Goblin Mirror yet but your recommendation encourages me to do so. So thank you for that — as well as for giving Myr the crown of very good company.:)
One of the characteristics of Myr that I was aware of from the beginning with Myr was what I call her “fidelity”, which is a very old-fashioned concept these days. But she is, to allude to the Shakespearian adage, true to herself and also true to others, a fidelity that guides her decisions throughout the book. I believe other characters also see that quality, from Taly and Dab at the beginning of Daughter of Blood, through to Ilai and Faro in their (very) different ways at the end, when the latter reflects that Myr (in her personality) is like “a drop of clear water, with the light shining through…” She also retains her innate gentleness throughout the book, whereas when I was writing Malian, especially in HEIR, I could feel her toughening up as the words and the events unfolded on the page.
I love the concept of fidelity. You incorporate in many characters, too. Asantir comes immediately to mind. Then again, she may be my favorite secondary character in the series.
Ah, I’m interested that you see “fidelity” as a core to several of the characters. I think it’s definitely part of why Kalan and Myr’s characters “spoke” to each other through the DAUGHTER story. Another old fashioned word that I associate with Myr is “humble” in the sense of unassuming. Asantir’s role precludes that, of course — but she does appear to be a favourite with many readers, which is good, since she has an important part to play in the conclusion of the story. However, I suspect that won’t be a surprise for followers of the series. 😉
That’s “allow”… sigh.
Ha, funny — I “read” allow anyway, rather than what you’d written. 😉
A good skill for comments but can create difficulties when writing books, ie the author’s eye sees what she or he expects to see. O-o!